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Thursday 21 December 2017

Week 1 - Day 1 - Activity 2 Setting Sail

Hi Ofa, Our journey to New Zealand is long but beautiful. The ocean and mountains are attractive and beautiful. I am nervous to be the first settlers in New Zealand but excited to explore the island. In a distance I can see the beautiful shores of New Zealand. I am amazed with the amount of nature and animals on this island. When I get on the island I'm going to spend my time swimming in the spectacular waters.
Yours Sincerely, FreemanImage result for beautiful new zealand photos
For this activity I had to describe how I am feeling to be the first settlers in New Zealand. I described the beautiful landscape of New Zealand and used powerful words to describe the beautiful nature.
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4 comments:

  1. Mataio22 December 2017 at 03:48

    Hi Freeman,
    I really like how you've added a picture of a beach to describe your letter. When I read your letter I was hooked in with all the powerful words you have used in this letter. Keep up the great work!

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  2. sarah Glen Innes School22 December 2017 at 17:12

    Aloha Freeman
    My name is Sarah and I go to Glen Innes School
    That picture of the beach is beautiful. When I read your letter I was straight away hooked on your first sentence. How did you find this task?

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  3. Ruby SLJ23 December 2017 at 09:15

    Hi Freeman,

    Ruby here from the Summer Learning Journey team.
    Well done! This is a great letter. I really like how you have talked about how beautiful the sea and mountains are.
    Can you tell us some more about the trees and the animals that are on New Zealand? How are they different from the trees and animals back at your old home?

    Have you ever been on a boat before? I have but I always get sea sick so it's never any fun!

    Cheers,
    Ruby.

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  4. daniel25 January 2018 at 11:58

    Hello Freeman
    Well done on completing this summer learning journey activity. Your letter to your friend is great. I like how you used someone in real life to write the letter to. It made you letter more realistic. Keep up the awesome work Freeman!
    Daniel

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