L.I. - Writing to recount
Writing using language features to engage readers
I heard the waves crawling to shore
I felt the warm sea on my palm
I wondered how the sea will look like in the future
I saw the sun glimmering onto the sea
I felt the cool sand between my fingers
I heard the loud seagulls hunting for prey
I wondered why the sea is salty
Photo By Piotr Zurek / CC BY 2.0
Kia Ora Freeman!
ReplyDeleteI really like your writing, what I like about is how you added in a picture and always started your sentences with the word I.
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Jessica:)