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Friday 26 August 2016

Poetry


On Writting LS1 had to make a poetry using Nouns,Adjectives,Verbs and Adverbs we had to work independently.I picked to do a Poetry about the sun.I found out that Adverb means that it is a Adjective describing a verb.This helped me because I learnt to use more Information and I used The Yellow,Shiny,Fat.Gleaming sun Traveled fast down the steep,rough road instead of the sun traveled fast down the road.We all used a imagination and had fun.

1 comment:

  1. Great post on your poetry, Freeman. I like that you've thought about how this poetry task has taught you to add more information into your writing.

    One correction though is that "fast" isn't an adverb, it's an adjective. The adverb you need to use is "quickly".

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