I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Ms Kirkpatrick and Mrs Anderson.
Friday, 26 August 2016
Poetry
On Writting LS1 had to make a poetry using Nouns,Adjectives,Verbs and Adverbs we had to work independently.I picked to do a Poetry about the sun.I found out that Adverb means that it is a Adjective describing a verb.This helped me because I learnt to use more Information and I used The Yellow,Shiny,Fat.Gleaming sun Traveled fast down the steep,rough road instead of the sun traveled fast down the road.We all used a imagination and had fun.
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Great post on your poetry, Freeman. I like that you've thought about how this poetry task has taught you to add more information into your writing.
ReplyDeleteOne correction though is that "fast" isn't an adverb, it's an adjective. The adverb you need to use is "quickly".