Saturday, 8 July 2017

Day 5 - Activity 1

Activity 1: After a few hours in the car, you, your group and Curious Kiwi arrive at your first stop – The Lewis Pass Scenic Reserve. It is a beautiful, regional park located at the base of the Southern Alps. You and your group get out of the van and follow Curious Kiwi. He is going to lead you on a short walk through the park. As you start walking, you notice a really cool looking tree on the side of the trail and you stop to take a closer look. When you turn back, the group (and Curious Kiwi) is nowhere to be found. Eek! You are all alone in the middle of a strange forest.

For this activity write a short story (8-10 sentences) about what might happen next. Please be sure to include lots of details about what you might be feeling, seeing and doing after you realise that you are all alone in the forest...

 I follow curious kiwi into the forest then when I stop to take a look at a tree beside the trail I turn back to see that I turned the wrong way and they didn't notice. I started to panic I look around the said to my self maybe I will find them, but when I looked all I saw was trees and grass. Then my adrenaline started to rush I thought to my self will a ever find them?. Then I had a idea I thought maybe If I follow this trail maybe it might lead to them so I followed and followed and followed then I realized I have seen this tree 10 times and notices I was going around in circles with the same trail then that was when I was even more terrified the sun was going down and the sky became darker and my hope became smaller. I shouted "curious kiwi!" then all I heard was the night sky then I said it once more "curious kiwi!" no reply. Then I went to the nearest Mountain then I saw my van I made my way there and was pretty excited to see curious kiwi.


  1. Hi Freeman
    You story is pretty cool. Just remember to check your work for spelling for punctuation errors before you publish it. Anyway, keep up the amazing work.

  2. Hey Freeman
    Good job on writing your short story. It sounds fabulous. Like Daniel said remember to check your work for spelling. Nice ending to your short story. Keep up the awesome work!

  3. Hi Freeman. Great story. Like Daniel said, remember to check your work for any spelling and punctuation errors. Keep up the amazing work.

  4. Hey Freeman,

    I love it when you say, "the sky became darker and my hope became smaller." It sounds really effective and reveals something about how you feel when you know you're getting even more lost and scared.

    Nice writing Freeman!


  5. Hello Freeman, you have added some really interesting sentences into your story like "the sky became darker and my hope became smaller." You are doing an awesome job so keep it up.