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Wednesday, 7 February 2018

Remembering our summer


L.I. - Writing to recount
Writing using language features to engage readers

I heard the waves crawling to shore
I felt the warm sea on my palm
I wondered how the sea will look like in the future
I saw the sun glimmering onto the sea
I felt the cool sand between my fingers
I heard the loud seagulls hunting for prey
I wondered why the sea is salty
File:New Chums beach Whangapoua Waikato.jpg
Photo By Piotr Zurek / CC BY 2.0

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Freeman!
    I really like your writing, what I like about is how you added in a picture and always started your sentences with the word I.

    Blog Ya Later!
    Jessica:)

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